Wednesday, 11 November 2020

The silly captain underpants (my version)

 Introduction 

            My character is captain  underpants the great super 

             hero.

 He is weak and a little bit strong he does fly a lot in the sky fighting bad guys and he  is big and he doesn't like big robots because they are too strong for captain underpants.






what do you think of my writing. What could I but in my

writing. what do you think about my story

My character lives in a green and grey house and he loves getting Harold Hutchins and George Beard into trouble.My character looks like a  bashed up superhero. 

My character's behaviour is like clumsy the smurf that's  why he gets bashed up a lot but sometimes he wins the battle sometimes!

I like my character because he likes ice cream like I do.


By Joseph

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