Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 25 November 2020
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Joyful Joseph,
ReplyDeleteI love your title, that hooked me in to read your story on your blog. I am proud at the detail you have put into your creative story about being shrunk in the classroom. It is great to see you experimenting with punctuation today especially speech marks. Your next step in class is to make your endings clear.
Miss Esselink