For writing I wrote my own story of angry from inside out I put in that Riley was mad and joy was making her happy and at the end she was happy again hope you like.
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
For writing I wrote my own story of angry from inside out I put in that Riley was mad and joy was making her happy and at the end she was happy again hope you like.
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Hi Joseph, I like your story about Angry. I like the ending when Riley is not angry anymore. What made Riley angry? Maybe you could add a bit more detail to the story.
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