Saturday, 28 August 2021

My story of angry in inside out

 





      For writing I wrote my own story of angry from inside out  I put in that Riley was mad and joy was making her happy and at the end she was happy again hope you like.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Joseph, I like your story about Angry. I like the ending when Riley is not angry anymore. What made Riley angry? Maybe you could add a bit more detail to the story.

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